Antigone Cadmus

Would you please critique my first YWS piece? Reflections on Pasiphae Other Fiction Thanks in advance, Tigger

Wow! Thanks a lot, April! I'm glad to know you liked it. Yeah, I thought I might be over-doing it with the choppiness, but... I think I'll keep it. And ...

Hey Peanut! Title: Reflections on Pasiphae Link: Genre: Other Fiction Rating: PG Thanks in advance!

Thank you so, so much everyone who helped! I recieved a monetary scholarship in a contest that was mostly won by seniors. You all have been invaluable. *snugs* Yay! My ...

9/10 :wink:

Heellooo, Doodle! Here (finally) as requested! A waxy globe hung high in the dark sky that was speckled with little white dots, peeking out from behind clouds. Meh. Waxy is ...

:shock: That's what Jack looks like?

8/10... I like it for some reason. :wink:

Done! Next?

Back! Meh. Mars has taken most of my nit-picks, and since most of your problems in here were repeated, I'll give you an overall. I find they can be just ...

Hiya, Lethero! Rosey Unicorn, who you requested a review from, doesn't like werewolf stories, I'm afraid (you'll see in her rules supernatural and horror are no-nos). But! I, however, love ...

Heeeeeyyyy, Rascal Lover! I'm Antigone, and I'll be your reviewer today. :wink: If you don't recognize my user name, it is because I have changed it! I used to be ...

Hey, Mizz-iceberg! Here as requested! :wink: No reviews yet? :( Time to change that! :D And yes... emoticons are amazing. :smt026 Your Review! Okay, first of all, how did you ...

You aren't being demanding at all! Afterall, I'm an instructor. :wink: That's what I'm here for! Bad choice of words...I know. O_o Not that I've been in the most lucid ...

Hey again! So you wanted me to elaborate. You had good points, especially on the description (though now I feel conflicted, because a previous reviewer suggested I needed more description, ...